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No matter day, or night
He will sedulously pursue
The one thing his heart desires most,
And that just happens, to be you.
He wishes to make
The dreams, of his most adored
Spring into life, as a flower
Emerges from its bud
In the dreariest drizzle of rain,
Or the most blinding of sunlight.
He will extend his hand
Offering you a chance, to dance
To two-step away,
From your monotonous, repetitive,
Planned out, hardwood waltz,
To leave the world behind.
He will adorn you with kisses,
Hidden in the words that he carves
From a block of simple ideas,
Into poetry that is fit
For a Queen, such as yourself.
In sickness, or in health
His eyes will only hold the strength
For the individual, who seizes his heart.
He is yours to stay, never leaving
So take him by the hand
And cuddle, beneath the moonlight,
The poet and the muse.
©2009 =Kiltul
:iconkiltul:

Author's Comments

Dictionary.com's word of the day was Sedulous. It inspired me to write a poem. So, here it is, and I hope you like it. I know I do. If there's anything that, like, needs fixing or anything, please tell me. Improvement is always good.

If you're having a bad day, pretend it's about you. I think it'll make you feel good.

Copyright =Kiltul

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:icondarkicekitsune:
X3 oh my gosh, that's so adorable!
:3 makes my day, and I was having a good day to begin with!

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And you're hot...in kind of a cute little kid way that kinda makes one feel like a pedophile... ~ J9 to Dark
:iconrulesmaker:
what is this, the special olympics poetry ?

now poetry doesnt have to rhyme so that anybody can write some >?

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Never assume other people are not idiots
:iconkiltul:
Did I piss you off somehow?

Poetry never has to rhyme. For example, go read some Robert Frost. He's an amazing American poet who doesn't constantly use childish rhymes in his poems.

*educational lesson for you*

Poetry –noun
1. the art of rhythmical composition, written or spoken, for exciting pleasure by beautiful, imaginative, or elevated thoughts.
2. literary work in metrical form; verse.

I hope you learned something...if not...I just wasted five minutes of my life on nothing.

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Snails see the benefits,
The beauty in every inch.
:iconkiltul:
That's great!

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Snails see the benefits,
The beauty in every inch.
:icondarkicekitsune:
XD I like that one part...too lazy to go look for it, but the part about the monotonous waltz. Love it. :3 very creative, very cool, just plain awesome

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And you're hot...in kind of a cute little kid way that kinda makes one feel like a pedophile... ~ J9 to Dark
:iconkiltul:
what can I say? I think waltzes are boring and stupid xD
why not do a 2-step?

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Snails see the benefits,
The beauty in every inch.
:icondarkicekitsune:
XD some waltzes are cool, but they do get awful boring terribly fast...
*grins* a two-step is lots livelier

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And you're hot...in kind of a cute little kid way that kinda makes one feel like a pedophile... ~ J9 to Dark

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